Audience Feedback for the 1st Draft

We took in some feedback from our peers about the short 1st draft we made. Here's the video of that:

The main pieces of feedback we got were:

• The arguing parents weren't convincing enough - not enough emotion.
• The focus wasn't right on the shot of Megan leaving her house so we'll have to reshoot that.
• Needs better continuity - need a shot of Megan getting into bed otherwise the jump is jarring.
• Might need to change the casting of Megan's parents as Nadia looks too young to be Megan's mother.